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Showing posts with label Jay Lake. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Jay Lake. Show all posts

Thursday, April 14, 2016

Our Lady of the Islands: Butchered God, Book One by Shannon Page, Jay Lake

Our Lady of the Islands was a finalist for the Endeavour Award as well as one of Publishers Weekly's Best Books. If not for a flaw I missed on the first read, it might have won. This novel succeeds in ways that Jay Lake's previous novels have not--primarily, the story movement is clearer (Mainspring came closest in this regard). His career may be remembered for his short fiction--his last collection won the Locus Poll and Endeavor awards--although that judgement remains to be seen.

Lake spun reams of wildly different tales, ventriloquizing wildly different voices. Words flew from his fingertips like water off a wet dog. Perhaps Page's contribution is that of the potter, molding the story clay into useful yet dynamic shapes. The pair complimented one another in this cooperative venture.

Sian Kattë is a middle-aged businesswoman bordering on her elderly years; some things she used to do, she can no longer. She has a husband but enjoys an understanding with her husband that allows for lover who is a ship's captain. Her world is up-ended when she walks into a parade of the Butchered God's followers. They beat her unconscious.

When she awakens, her body has healed of bruises and broken bones. More than that, she heals a young boy of a laceration that should have maimed or even killed him but did not. The boy's arm healed where she'd touched him. This would be wonderful if it were not for the major religion's priests who do not allow female priests or healers. She becomes their target and, later, their prisoner when they learn what she can purportedly do.

Arian des Chances, the wife of Alizar's ruler, meanwhile, has been appealing to the old religion's priests to heal her son. They hem and haw, leave her waiting and frustrated to the point of seeking another religion whose acolytes still perform miracles. But then she hears of this healer. She plans to go into disguise to get the healer to work wonders on her son.

Clocking in at over five hundred pages for a hardcover, this qualifies as a fat fantasy, with all the traps and enchantments that such readers hold for the field. On my first read, I thought some of the later middle sagged. But it wasn't the middle. My confusion shows how well Page and Lake sucked me in up to the last fifth. My first read so fully engaged my brain in story, that I missed it was the final act of the book that stuttered. They trimmed the conflicts down to just one major one where, before, they had deftly juggled several. A long denouement followed the climax, which was interesting on the first read---less so, on the second. Then again, I'm the kind of reader who believes Tolkien could have ended The Lord of the Rings earlier. Long and leisurely is the fat fantasy genre's modus operandi.

[Edited to add: I waffled further. The denouement is fascinating. It holds the same appeal as the prolific "Where Are They Now?" articles. Plenty of readers will gobble this down.]

The previous "understanding" mentioned earlier turns out not to be understood by all parties. This seems a minor complaint but it undermines our main character's reliability, which I doubt we're meant to distrust. Hopefully, this will clarify in a future volume--either way.

I hadn't considered the novel to be particularly feminist--older female protagonists, yes--but a number of reviewers labeled it as such. So I applied the Bechdel test--that is, does the secondary gender only speak of the primary? It didn't pass. But the secondary characters wouldn't have been nearly as interesting if they had spoken of their own concerns.  The protagonists were more fully developed than their loyal lackeys, anyway (readers should be more interested in the primary characters than secondary).

The antagonists, men, were bumbling, but I read them as that faceless bureaucratic monster that permeates our society, not as undervaluing the opposite gender. The antagonists were occasionally clever as well. As I said, it isn't particularly feminist, except as a call to include women in religious roles--a minor theme--but it may appeal to feminists due to the nature of the protagonists more than their situations.

Instead, I read it more as a response to the then common protests against the "one percent" [Occupy _____]. But this theme fell away. The next books may address this further. I am curious where this might lead since our protagonists are almost entirely the one percent. They are presented as willing to get their hands dirty. Where they gained that perspective is a mystery if they've been like this their whole lives. Maybe later books in the series will explore this. Or maybe they will unveil an entirely different theme. The main point on theme is that Lake and Page do provide food for thought.

While this is part of a series, the novel stands alone from predecessors and from any future sequels.  I recommend it for any regular readers of Jay Lake's or readers of fantasy. The characters are rich, their troubles absorbing.

Wednesday, November 20, 2013

Analysis of "Midnight at Valdosta's" by Jay Lake

First appeared in The Steampunk Megapack* (?).

Hemp Cumin drives his mule, Salt, into Triune Town to make his midnight appointment at Valdosta's.  In exchange for found objects that have stories to tell, the protagonist will live another year.

This may be Jay Lake's best tale.  It resonates beyond itself, especially knowing that Lake, like the protagonist, struggled to stay alive [fighting cancer], hoping for another of life and of telling stories.

According to freedictionary.com, salt is "An element that gives flavor or zest."    This interpretation is backed up by  the protagonist's last name, Cumin.  The mule is probably an extension of its owner, relating to its also meaning, "a stubborn person" (same source).  The protagonist's first name, Hemp, on the other hand, denotes a coarse, tough fiber (same source) often used to make rope. It also has a humorous connotation, which the author may or may not have intended.  Triune--meaning "three in one. Used especially of the Christian Trinity"--town makes it clear that death is meant.  Valdosta is a border town (in Georgia on the Florida edge).  Although some irony may be intended [from Wikipedia]:
"...named after the Valle d'Aosta in Italy. The name Aosta (Latin: Augusta), refers to Emperor Augustus. Thus, the name Valdosta can be interpreted literally as meaning "Valley of Augustus' City". Originally, a long-standing rumor held that the city's name meant "vale of beauty."[9] The land around Valdosta is flat."
This shows some of the protagonist's uncertainty of whether he wants to live or not, yet he does go on, chooses to live another year.

This tale has given more insight into Lake's process than I've previously found.  Although Lake's organic work tends fall outside of "design" [link gives a nice summary], it reminds me of Edgar Allan Poe's use and definition of a story ("Philosophy of Composition") where the effect or the conjuration of the reader's emotional response is primary.

* I'm not sure why this is considered steampunk.

Saturday, October 5, 2013

Jay Lake's "Golden Pepper"

First appeared in Flash Fiction Online.

A man bets Death that his love for his wife is greater than death.  Is he right?  Does he want to be?

A great line from the story (especially the latter part):
"Death’s smile blossomed into a rare laugh that set the skeletons of mice to dancing within the walls, while a rotting dog in the alley outside staggered to its feet and trotted into the marketplace."

Tuesday, September 17, 2013

Jay Lake's Process of Writing

Here's an ebook I bought immediately.  Jay Lake's Writing Process (This has a link to a contest, and to various ebook formats.  I originally thought the title a poor choice until I started reading and realized it was perfect.)

I've been friends with Jay almost since he started writing professionally--humorous, friendly, fun and  often interesting to hang with.  I fondly recall our drive to Wiscon, the conversations and The Rolling Stones marathon.  A good man in many ways.

I'll write a full review later, but it is full of Jay Lake's writing wisdom.  Frankly, his ideas on story ideas are mystical mumbo-jumbo (sorry, Jay), but I'm sure they would be useful to those with a very organic writing styles.  However, much of the other stuff has valuable writing nuggets:  names, productive lifestyles, the business, and world-building details.

For years I've wanted to move out to Oregon, to live near Jay and the Wordos workshop, but couldn't figure out a practical way to do so.  This ebook is a good substitute--it makes it feel like you're in conversation with the writer.

I highly recommend it.

Monday, August 19, 2013

Peering into the heaven/hell of human behavior: What makes humans tick?

Reading is good for ambiguity.

"children are more likely to condone harm between different social groups when the explicit rules are removed." 
What that means is in the air--learned from parents/peers? inherent in the human makeup? something else?
Forbes covers how, when people are jealous, 1 out of 5 times it's due to posts on Facebook...
but this misses the point.  A social network should allow people to celebrate with the celebrating, mourn with the mourners.
Another Facebook complaint -- this time about the users -- tries to set up boundaries about the (im)proper ways to post... 
but the blanket judgments can lead to poor conclusions about human behavior.  Rather, it seems one's decision to post should be based on whether it could be interesting to others.  Again, though, as it is social, "friends" should be able to be friends:  supporting and cheering you on, or (this latter assumes a privacy setting).
Is writing down emotions as healthy in the internet environment as Pennebaker's 1986 study showed?
Interesting discussion albeit without substantial new evidence.
Another advocating for privacy setting on Facebook (new graph search)

Forbes on why you shouldn't give stores your zip code

How to Identify and Avoid Spreading Misinformation

Jay Lake on the unknowing/knowing annoying glare.

The ineffable:  Miracle in traffic

This post on a Chinese zoo passing off a dog as a lion...
makes me wonder how cool would a whole zoo of such animals be?
De-cluttering the Brain

Win at Monopoly using statistics.

Friday, May 17, 2013

"Into the Gardens of Sweet Night" by Jay Lake

Originally appeared in WOTF XIX
Nominated for the Hugo 

This has the feel of Lake's Mainspring-universe novels (Mainspring, Escapement, and Pinion) although not as inventive considering it's a novelette.  On an alternate Earth, Elroy joins Wiggle, a well-dressed dog, on his journey in order to get back into the Gardens of Sweet Night, in orbit around the world--even though he doesn't believe the myth of Sweet Night.  Security wolves attack and dog their every step because former-gardener Wiggles ate the apples of Lord Liasis.  They stow away on a dirigible and attend their own sky burial.  Finally, they make it up into orbit, where they meet Lord Liasis himself.

The opening title "Chance Meeting" describes Lake's modus operandi in his early work often nigh-picaresque although here it merely ambles to its beginning.  Lake's labors focus on the strong narrative voice and evocation of a new world.  This particular tale thumbs its nose at a literalized God who lives in the sky, making people play games with life.  Everyman Elroy chooses, instead of a lord of space, an ordinary life.

Great line of dialogue:
"Trust us, you'll feel like a new man after the funeral."

Tuesday, January 15, 2013

Writers, Writing, Free, Movies, Art, Science, Philosophy and Education

Writers and Writing:
Kristine Ong Muslim sample from her collection, We Bury the Landscape.

  • Be one of the annoying cool kids to discover her before everyone else, and you'll say, "Oh, yeah. You mean you haven't read her?"

Free ebooks:
David Farland story

Islamic SF
Movies

Film about writer Jay Lake's life & fight against cancer (Kickstarter/support)
Jay Lake has stage IV cancer and has a fundraiser for new treatment.
Petition to restore missing 25-min to Clive Barker's Nightbreed

Art and Artists (one's a fine writer, too)
Waiter Kevin Fair turns your guest checks into art

Mark Ferrari's art, writing and blog
Science, Philosophy and Education:
Giant squid

Future travelers to Mars may have to have psychological toughness.

Brain implant for depression.

The probable improbable?

Interesting link says, "[M]any students abandon their pursuit of science and engineering majors [because t]heir professors are grading too hard."
Comment: What this link doesn't show (and what I tell students) is that while students may get lower grades here, they may get higher pay/demand outside of college.  
On Social Media (gives partial perspective on where our electronic culture is headed):

Thursday, June 17, 2010

"The Dead Man's Child" by Jay Lake

Appearing in Cosmos, "The Dead Man's Child" is Jay Lake's latest--an inspirational tale.

Summary: Marguerite wants to know about the high lines. Whatever it is, her father has passed away doing it. She desires to work them before even knowing what they entail. She risks getting herself in trouble at school by daring to ask about it.

Key Passage:
"I advise simplicity in life. Choice kills."

"And choice can make you great," says Marguerite stubbornly.

"Of course." Mr Grieve sounds surprised. "Without risk, there is no reward."

"So tell me of the high lines."

Comment: Interestingly, Jonah Lehrer states a case for something similar to advocating simplicity in How We Decide--too much information paralyzes us, essentially preventing us from making good decisions. (This comment is merely a note of interest.)