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Monday, March 23, 2020

Review: Knocking the Stars Senseless by Clif Mason (II)


Part II


This recurring theme [that beauty can enlighten tragedy] returns in “Ghost Music” as it deals with the speaker’s loss of his father: “The singing tongue is cut from autumn’s river.” In essence, Mason’s speaker asks us in his songs: How can we keep singing when the world is full of pain? The answer comes, through much pain, at the poem’s end:

Wind picks his pocket again as he ambles.
It steals again sweat from his body, music from his ears.

It takes again the gait from his legs, the taste from his tongue.
The more it steals, the less he feels bound by gravity.
He laughs as the wind bears him off like a kite.

Knocking the Stars Senseless (Paperback)When I critiqued his poems, I often slammed Mason’s use of “stars” in his poetry as I’d seen too many awful poems written with that in them, but through judicious use and careful building of his motif, he’s made the stars his own. It is in the book title and the titular poem, after all. And it’s cleverly deployed, to boot. The stars could be incandescent dots that candle the night, or those whom society reveres, for whatever reason, or the heavenly afterlife (“to drink from the stars’ chalice / the black anodyne of sleep.”—“Fugue for the Sandy Hook Dead” or in “I Wore the Night Like a Roquelaure” where when a grandmother passes, the speaker’s song becomes “the new star of resolve / in her brain’s core.” That last poem, especially at its titular moment, seems to be the transformation of the speaker who turns grief into something transcendent.). And “senseless” could be unconscious or a lack of meaning. All of these senses fuel Mason’s poetry. (Am I eating crow? Very well, I eat crow.)

In “The Sea Anemone Must Wed Lightning” Mason writes of suffering as a thing we carry, perhaps belongings we should value:

What can I say of this suffering,
except that it is mine? I will carry it

into autumn, holding it over
my head as, crossing a river,
I would a bundle of clothes.

Later, the speaker sings what he wants songs to do:

I want the song that will lift
the moon’s white bone back
into its black socket. I want the song....

that will raise a fallen
child, if only for a day

The final poem, “Thanksgiving Song,” refines this idea of song (brought up in “I Wore the Night Like a Roquelaure” – discussed above) as the magic that words carry in them and the magic that we carry within us:

I can sing with the broken bone
of the yellow half-moon....

Each name sings
light needles into ebony dusk....

we are all
yes, each & every one, the last
least, best unexpected thing.

This poem—with a few rivals for being the best in the book—deserves to be anthologized in a dozen or two good anthologies. Poet Patrick Hicks also singled out this poem. Forgive the excerpt as only the whole poem can do it justice.

Judith Sornberger writes that his work is “Incantatory as Whitman” which you’ll find in a poem like “Depression”:

All the harvesters are falling apart, shaking & shuddering
& collapsing before they can leave the fields.
All the luxury automobiles are falling apart
in garages & shops & on the street
All the bridges & skyscrapers are falling apart
falling to rust & poisonous dust & bent & sheered rebar.

These excerpts and examinations should more than adequately suggest why you should acquire this book for yourself (or get your library to do so, if you cannot afford it).

What makes these poems stand out above most contemporary poetry: His poems tell you why you should read them. The images and sounds—even interesting philosophic content—suck the reader in. Not the particular political stance as if poetry were more about politics than aesthetics (although, yes, Mason toes the line of the politically correct), not the surreal inscrutability (although, yes, Mason uses some of that), not a bolus of images that are hard to swallow (although, yes, Mason’s imagery astounds and confounds), but he uses his silvery tongue to get us to leap after, to travel to this strange land we tread upon and intriguing scenarios, or some other spark of interest to keep us reading and rereading.

For example, “Darkfall” opens with intrigue and mystery:

For centuries we seeded the cemeteries
so it was no surprise the soil
grew nothing but headstones.

How can those lines not get one to read on? This is part of what makes this book rise above its peers. If poets and poetry readers aren’t flocking to this book this year, then there’s too little justice in the world, but at least it exists and we the lucky, who have read it, can lift it over our heads as if crossing a river and call on others to hear these songs.


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